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Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnated as a Son of the Sword Saint and the Sage

Kaiju_TSlaymer
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I will give this one bit of criticism. Setting up Edith as a villainess taking over as Empress in this manner is very... cliche and a bad way of implementing it. This kind of personality is better off helping out the main character and his family with how things are progressing..... I can see her as a possible political side lover of Raphael. If she stays this course. Especially with her seeming to be creating her own political harem of males..... This would be one of the best ways to keep her as a possible "Anti Villain" (I suggest researching that term) or Villainess that is always allied with Raphael. We know what kind of Enemies the cast will be facing and how powerful they are. Edith has more potential in this series than what is currently happening around her. .......... So the possible two best choices would be to either put a second "green crown (hat)" on the prince or to have Edith have a "romantic" relationship with Raphael instead of a "political one" like she is manipulating with her current harem.