invayne
I’m Loving this story, it’s potential to be a epic story is high. If I were to have a single complaint, it would be the MC. he has absolutely no presence so far, it’s so low that if you literally took him off the page, the story wouldn’t change much. I know there’s a lot of character growth to be had and that he’s just coming into his own, and I can’t wait to see how he grows. Just giving my opinion of him up to this chapter.