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Comments of chapter undefined of King of Mages - A TBATE Fanfic

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King of Mages - A TBATE Fanfic

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Cristofer157
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I think it's all a little too straight and a little forced, like, virion took the MC just knowing the talent and fuck? he didn't even ask anything important. you could show when the MC enters the palace.

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Cristofer157
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This is just constructive criticism for you to improve.

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Lol_2050
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Thanks for the chapter

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GodOfPride_z
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Thanks for the chapter 🙂

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Vucols
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more

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Daoist866791
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Thanks for the chapter

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Fisherman_Dream
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Thanks for the chapter.

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Drunken_Sleeper
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Thanks for the chapter

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