Jeri_
Really decent start here. Interesting, characters arenât flat, theyâre realistic, and I can totally see how this disastrous first date totally could happen in real life. Some small grammatical errors here and there but great start! I pointed out everything I could find in the paragraphs. Keep up the great work!
Hello everyone, here is the author. Since not everyone reads reviews, I would like to point out here; Mc does not act like this in the rest of the chapters either, he changes his conceited personality very quickly. So before you make any assumptions about how stupid he is, I would ask you to scroll down and read on. Not everyone is going to like him, and that's okay, I understand that, but please at least hold off on telling me how terrible he is, I know that. Do not worry, he's changing. đ«Ą