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Comments of chapter undefined of Protagonist's Evil System: My Girlfriend Turned Into A Dragon

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StumblingtoSuccess
StumblingtoSuccessLv11StumblingtoSuccess

Where is truck kun!? that fker is slacking lately.

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CetusWritings
CetusWritingsLv3CetusWritings

Oh my, who is that handsome person that helped you with the title? 🩈

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Drei05
Drei05Lv4Drei05

It's a good start! Keep up the good work :3 Oliver is a good friend but a bad influence to Lucas -,-

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TANA_ELIS
TANA_ELISLv1TANA_ELIS

This is super amazing. Almost like watching a movie.. honestly. The ML is totally relatable, d@ngerous online but calm in person. Jeri's writing style has improved a hundred percent and I'm definitely going to keep reading (first ML novel I'm reading past chapter 2)đŸ€đŸ€đŸ€âœš

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One_Winged_Angel
One_Winged_AngelLv15One_Winged_Angel

Really decent start here. Interesting, characters aren’t flat, they’re realistic, and I can totally see how this disastrous first date totally could happen in real life. Some small grammatical errors here and there but great start! I pointed out everything I could find in the paragraphs. Keep up the great work!

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notrokis
notrokisLv12notrokis

Intriguing first chapter and double character of protagonist. His online personality is so cocky but it’s fun to see how it comes out in real life 😂 Great chapter author âœŒđŸ»

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Jeri_
Jeri_AuthorJeri_

Hello everyone, here is the author. Since not everyone reads reviews, I would like to point out here; Mc does not act like this in the rest of the chapters either, he changes his conceited personality very quickly. So before you make any assumptions about how stupid he is, I would ask you to scroll down and read on. Not everyone is going to like him, and that's okay, I understand that, but please at least hold off on telling me how terrible he is, I know that. Do not worry, he's changing. đŸ«Ą

Alancaster
AlancasterLv12Alancaster

An amazing start! I find Luca relatable but can't feel much sorry for his transmigration story lol You DO NOT insult shady people! Jk, looking forward to how this unfolds [img=recommend]

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Tres_Aguila
Tres_AguilaLv13Tres_Aguila

What an action-filled first chapter. it was like I was watching a movie. I absolutely love Lucas. splendid job author Jeri😍😍😍😍😍

Aldrighi
AldrighiLv13Aldrighi

Wow... i must say i have never felt so frustrated about a MC in a single chapter. If i thought to myself how to make someone as annoying and wimpy as possible, this would be it.

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Lemon_Pope
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Hello there Weird start I hope he doesn’t behave like that later in the story Anyway thanks for the chappy

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