Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnated in a novel as a maid

dude you spend the whole chapter going over this one character and just repeating things over and over again

ANOTHER new character?! Bro, this is like the tenth already, slow it down. I can’t even remember who I need to be worrying about… the elven princess? The instructor lady who was also a stalker(I think) these need to be more consolidated. If a club doesn’t matter, or she isn’t going to care about it, don’t explain it. If a person isn’t going to be right away in the story, keep them at a bare minimum of descriptions. Please. Too many characters too quickly is a bad thing, especially since these are all the ‘main characters’ of the ‘novel’ Ellis is in…

too much information can you just say she is a rare sadistic beautiful succubus

Author being a simp in 1 whole chapter xD