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Comments of chapter undefined of Pokémon : A Rough Start In Kanto

dabbler101
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Thanks for the chapter! And tbh I don’t really mind the pacing. You’re making by far one of the best Pokémon fanfic I’v read. So keep it up 👍🏼

SnorlaxLord
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Author I'm loving the maturation of the MC😍

XenonNoble
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Becky becoming a liability. She getting too comfortable around MC. Wonder is she will finally wake up to the conical side of she encounters death personally (like MC kills someone or pokemon cause of her). Not judging, just how I’m seeing Becky throughout the chapter. Hope to see the next one soon.

Jin_Kazaragi
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Merci pour le chapitre !

David_Drake
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I won't mind a big time skip. Or a big...

Xx_KamiKaze_xX
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You should have buy the abandoned city and renovate it for passive income

ooKIng01
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Thanks for the chapter Glad to see the MC's character growth. is it more dangerous for him to go along with becky, yes. But he can't stay jaded and isolationist for the rest of his life. He is smart, resourceful and is gaining strength. He will hopefully in time find people he can trust.

LiquorSquad
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Do you take suggestion for training? A lot of Pokemon novels go into various training styles so it might serve as a source of inspiration, some go into a more "esoteric" style where they "cultivate" energies to make new moves, or combining moves, or harnessing part of the moves (like, a lot of novels go for the "quick attack" to use it to evade), or evolving moves (evolving quick attack to extreme speed), or training moves to the extreme and do them in a split second or extra charged, or making more than one move at the same time, the list goes on

Ptitkactus
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If you make a Big timeskip, plz make his pokemon evolve off screen,I find it so bad when authors make 3 years timeskip and the mc pokemons barely got better ... bro in 3 years you should already have op Mons...

Chocolatecookie070
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I did not like that, him bending the knee to Becky's whims, he should stick to his principles and be done with her attitude 🙄. I am trying to see some sensible reasoning here, but she can not do anything to him. Everything she owns right now is thanks to him, living in his place and all because he lets her. That life debt from before? Repaid a bazillion times already. Cmon, this is not like him, putting himself and his team in needless danger.

MagicSand
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Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

Fostr
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A good time to introduce some new character in the next chapter...

Dragaim
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one of the best pokemon fanfic . take all my stone

laboonlaboon
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thanks for the chapter [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Vahn
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Rochirush
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Thanks for the good chapter 👍👍👍

ZainSad
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ManasCiel
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Thanks for the chapter!

Daoist943346
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TFTC

Mysticwolf
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write how you want to hopefully will get at least some more heists chapters with the mc showing becky how it's done nab a few pokemon from the black market three eevee two for the mc one for the girl with spinarak or joltik bro needs a field control expert and those two spiders could make him a God of destruction in battle