Raj_Shah_7152
Its quite good but i would say author san the mc should have quite competent subordinates that he can rely on who can also fight up teir, like hero of darkness and like my three wives are beautiful vampires, your story and every thing is quite good but on both novels this part is quite lacking, for example when neatwit was struggling in the counsil of monarchs its my pov and i think who doesnt like competent subordinates just said my mind i hope you dont mind !