Comments of chapter undefined of AS DARKSEID IN MARVEL (OMNIVERSE)

Well, going good so far, a few issues are spelling sentences and scenes description, plus Darkseid. a few sentences are off, and scenes description can be shorten with more higher English words than general Englishs, so to not add unnecessary words. Darkseid needs elegant, arrogance, intelligence. Example: "Bringer of chaos, Ender of dreams and wishes, I.. AM.. DARKSEID!" Said Darkseid with calm yet dominant in his voice.

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the great chapter .

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thanks for the chapter

Don't drop this work like previous zeus

Nice work so far.... Please don't drop this novel

Thanks for the chapter Author-Sama. As always you never disappoint with the chapter. Waiting for you to get Ophis.

Thanks for the chapter

alternate universe timelines like the Sliders series can get confusing.

sorry, i couldn't continue. too many fov, I just think that the story is not progressing.