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Comments of chapter undefined of MHA: A Change in Course (Stopped)

skyforce
skyforceLv14skyforce

Keep on writing

Bruscar
BruscarLv10Bruscar

author I think the problem is not with the mc, but with the way you developed the story, most readers prefer to see the daily life of the character and see how the plot is progressing little by little while the mc is also part of it . that is to say that your mc entered UA and that he also lived the events of the plot but changing them a little or if you have a good idea changing them completely, but the important thing is the calm development of the story, and that the MC hits when have to give them. In a previous comment I told you an idea of ​​how it could be carried out, but that depends on you. and a recommendation from me, the beginning in the void or with a god I think he is a bit burned out, it would be better if he reincarnated directly and little by little discovered his abilities.

El_tonno_grande
El_tonno_grandeLv1El_tonno_grande

I actually have no clue about Azur Lane, but it's actually quite interesting to read.

SwordOfTired
SwordOfTiredLv14SwordOfTired

I'm sad to see that this is being dropped. I was enjoying it but I will say it felt a little shallow in some areas of the writing. I look forward to reading the summaries of vol 2 and 3. Having the story set in MHA but having it outside of the academy would have been a great thing to explore in my opinion. Following Deku and other high schoolers around with this character just does not make sense in my opinion.