Dylan_Callahan
As long as you try! you are doing better then most. if you can take some criticism, you can make a better story. First story are your learning from story.
Thank man. I just get confused I guess when I try to describe and outline things sometimes. But your right the first story is the one you learn from.
I don't get this chapter at all! I mean only half would be sleeping, nobody has guard duty? Something else bothers me!