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Comments of chapter undefined of Soldier Son-in-law.

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Soldier Son-in-law.

Dylan_Callahan

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Damon26
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I don't get this chapter at all! I mean only half would be sleeping, nobody has guard duty? Something else bothers me!

1yr
Dylan_Callahan
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Sorry about that. I meant to add that the enemy silently killed all of the guards that were on duty. I guess I suck at writing so bad that I still can't get it right. my apologizes. But thank you for still reading along.

1yr
Damon26
Damon26Lv12Damon26

As long as you try! you are doing better then most. if you can take some criticism, you can make a better story. First story are your learning from story.

1yr
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