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Comments of chapter undefined of Soldier Son-in-law.

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Soldier Son-in-law.

Dylan_Callahan

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Damon26
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I don't get this chapter at all! I mean only half would be sleeping, nobody has guard duty? Something else bothers me!

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Dylan_Callahan
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hey sorry man I am a new writer, and I am still working out my style of writing. Thank you for the feedback.

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Damon26
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As long as you try! you are doing better then most. if you can take some criticism, you can make a better story. First story are your learning from story.

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