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Lethus
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those slize of Zanzan chapters do the story really well! I specially like how you fill in the picutre of this Jamiz-family. That makes Zanzan as a city so much more alive - and we don‘t have this kind of acces anymore alone from Alexanders POV. So great job - thanks a lot! A little personal wish: It would be good if genius like Waali would need to be reported to the temple. Maybe Ophenia overhears the priest gossiping in the temple. And because of Alxx teaching she knows how terrifying this talent must be to find Eulers arithmetic mean. And in the guise and belief that geniuses are Gaias gifts (shown be the example of Alexander) to their worshippers they have to be gathered in the temple. So that Gaias gift can be unpacked to its fullest. Maybe specialized afternoon 1:1 classes from dedicated priests? —> therefor Ophenia makes a talent factory for Alexander. Look up the the greek / roman interpetation of genius - and nice read; a genius is actually a helper that is sent to you as a gift of the gods. Not something inherent and something to be arrogant of - but thankful for their God‘s gift.