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Comments of chapter undefined of Herald of Steel

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KrazyNight
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I love this novel, but I EXTREMELY want to see different P.O.V. The daily life of his citizens. How they describe the new city. Not just 1 or 2 chapters. But maybe 10-20 chapters, perhaps a mini arc about his adventures throughout the city and their daily life. The current chapter describes the city’s progress/ changes is like “ we have this shop selling this. This is the market area”. Can’t you add “ flowery words” while describing the city. I just can’t picture how the current city looks like. What’s their reaction towards Goddess Gia. How does it effect their daily lives. Their teachings. Oh maybe the P.O.V can start as a peasant, merchant, etc from a different city. A few chapters describing the crimes, customs, stench, beliefs about their city. And perhaps his Culture Shock when he leaves and goes to the MC’s city.

KrazyNight
KrazyNightLv11KrazyNight

Mc should invent “time” super important

Joshua_Swofford
Joshua_SwoffordLv15Joshua_Swofford

Now that Alex is in charge Perseus got no chance