Comments of chapter undefined of The Breaking of Fate [High Quality]

oh no what I feared is happening. the girl oc kiyomi she is too marie sue although you are trying to make her power increases have a certain logic, it is quite annoying that it is highlighted that she is beautiful in every possible occasion, that she has talent. It doesn't bother me too much but it's because she didn't have much time to talk either. That surely everything he does would turn out well and blah, blah

The story where anyone can run from anyone

Thanks for the chapter.

You mc could have just done that during konoha pain attack. 😒 IK it may sound cowardly and all, but that provided most success.

Ths for the chap

ya comienza la invasion a konoha

Good chapter

tanks

Thank you for the chapter and nice job