Comments of chapter undefined of The Vampire King's Possession

I hope this story will be continued as i quite like the set up for it 🥰, so there are some things i would like to point.Firstly there are lot of spelling mistakes, sometimes even his/her is messed up as well as could/couldn't or would/wouldn't which makes it at times difficult to understand certain sentences or the true intentions of people. For this alone the story certainly needs a lot of editing for past chapters and preferably proofreading for future chapters. 😉The pace of the story in some chapters is really slow and they are some scenes that could be cut or reduce to a sentence or two especially some bath scenes, Mauve getting ready for the meals, some scenes where it's just the same 🙂. I was quite satisfied with the pace for the chapters with the palers attack, when Mauve traveld with Jael, and also the recnt chapters with the meeting where written much better, in my opinion. 🥰As for character progression, i find Jael is doing quite well he is starting to warm up to Mauve changing his ways and for me his actions are comprehensible. We also know quite a bit about his backround story so there are still some secrets left. 🥰For Mauve i find her recent development is more backwards.🤔 At the start she mentioned she sometimes ask inappropriate questions but now she seemed to have stopped that altogether even so Mill and especially Jael are quite close to her. It feels like Mauve's self-worth declines rather than increases as the story progresses but i can't quite comprehend why that is because Jael does nothing but assure her in recent chapters. After they established she is there to stay i thought we had a breakthrough in there relationship but it wasn't 😔I just don't get why she still distrusts Jael and Mill like that after all this time when she seemed to have little problem with Sabrina. Is Mauve starting to get depression from lack of sun and freedom or are her scars from the past that deep that she can't trust what people close to her say at all 🤔I also think for someone who has no way back and accepted she will stay in the vampire kingdom Mauve is not curious enough to learn much about the kingdom or the vampires. We as readers know much more about the backround stories of Jael, Mill and Eric as well as vampires in general.Jael has been shuttig Mauve out from information at the start but he is getting better and Mauve currently doesn't grab those opportunities. Even so at the start of the story i had the feeling she is quite a curious and adventures person, now she feels very docile unless she is intimate with Jael 😅I'm just a bit confused because Mauve has a huge libary on books at her disposal and mainly reads jet it doesn't seem she reads anything useful or informative about her new life and still shies away from asking Jael or Mill about learning new languages or about vampires or thevampire region. There must be books about that in the libary if Jaels mother was a collector. We as a reader don't even know what she has been reading all this time 😓 At least the titles or a brief mentionig of the contents of important books would be nice and would add to the depth of the story. 🥰I realy love the world thats been described so far with vampires living at night, burning in the sun, drinking blood (so why they eat normal food has never been mentioned🤔), cutting open their guts to appease the king and pulling out their fangs as punishment. The story has a lot of potential. 🥰 I just wished we could embark on the journey to get to know the vampires and vampire region together with Mauve rather than knowing so much more about what's going on than her. 🥰

please post another update soon 🙏!!!

Any idea when we might get new chaoters?

More than enough time to have some sexy time 🥰🥰🥰

23 days and no updates!! 😩 I hope that I didnt waste my time reading a book with no ending. Author please give us an update!!!

I’m waiting on some more chapters its been a while since I’ve seen any new ones please don’t make the readers wait for months before you write a chapter

Miss u!

Dear author are you not going to allow the readers of this lovely book to finish the story we have been waiting for you to publish more chapters on this story but you havent’ can you please let us know if you are not going to finish so we can stop wasting our time its’ not fair to us that you keep readers waiting for something that’s not going to happen please let us know

Do you guys think she’s going to continue

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Thanks for the chapter, I ran out today🥳🥳

No update???

I hope you continue writing Author. your release is slow but your book is good. much like a slow burn novel .