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Comments of chapter undefined of The Vampire King's Possession

Beth_Bussey_3112
Beth_Bussey_3112Lv15Beth_Bussey_3112

The dynamics between Mauve and Jael is interesting but I swear if I read about one more meal or one more bath I’m giving up!

Zuchiku
ZuchikuLv15Zuchiku

Jael seems to have become a lot more possesiv of her than before 😘 while it's cute I fear and hope Mauve will find a way to be more independent. I'm still surprised she hasn't learnt much about vampires and the kingdom considering there is a huge libary and she alreday read so much. Mauve is comfortable around Jael now and she is healing so i would expect her to me proactive and adventures in the future chapters🤔While a step by step writing is fine if she has the same routine every morning (night) and nothing out of the ordinary happens things can be just mentioned in a sentence instead of over a few paragraphs.I like the discusion about what dress she weares because they had to take her wound into consideration but the bath could have been just mentioned. At this point we know her routine of the bath and the morning we don't need a step by step discription everytime. Unless she talks about something important with Mills during the bath you could just write she go ready for the first meal. 😉 I would much rather have Mauve starting to ask questions about whats going on in the castle. As mentioned above considering she thinks of the castle as her home I find her quite passiv at this point in the story without much of a reason to be. 🥰

lakeslate
lakeslateLv15lakeslate

These two!! Need some after care conversations about life and the future💙💙💙💙💙💙💙

LadyChef
LadyChefLv14LadyChef

This is kind of mundane chapter of daily activities I thought they would start communicating by now. He hasn’t even gotten close to expressing his feelings and what about the mate thing