Comments of chapter undefined of Villain of my own novel

well…. too much cringe especially the MC, I was expecting a lot reading the first chapters but this one disappointed me greatly. The overly used Haaah, scrashing head like a japanese MC, acting like he met a beautiful woman for the first time and the overly cringe misunderstandings, bro he literally died a couple chapters ago and we’re already at the go lucky comedy stage of the story?

she's Def frostines reincarnation

well i am just at the starting point i will read it forst

This chapter is completely Stupid ...... If i get another chapter like this i am dropping the novel

my question to author, would you run after someone you just met while they are riding bike

We really don't need a third of the last chapter repeated every new chapter. The author isn't very good at the multiple POV thing when each POV is so closely identical to the last.

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thanks for the chapter