Comments of chapter undefined of Villain of my own novel

well…. too much cringe especially the MC, I was expecting a lot reading the first chapters but this one disappointed me greatly. The overly used Haaah, scrashing head like a japanese MC, acting like he met a beautiful woman for the first time and the overly cringe misunderstandings, bro he literally died a couple chapters ago and we’re already at the go lucky comedy stage of the story?

she's Def frostines reincarnation

well i am just at the starting point i will read it forst

This chapter is completely Stupid ...... If i get another chapter like this i am dropping the novel

my question to author, would you run after someone you just met while they are riding bike

simp

great start author[img=update][img=update]

thanks for the chapter