BlackStar_BH
That all sounds overly complicated and convoluted. I cant see why it would makes sense as a story in anyones mind. Thats practically two seperate stories. Not what the title and synopses promises at all. Im here for the ATG world not more One Piece. You were trying to be too complicated. The fanfic was bound to be a dumpster fire at some point with all the Plot holes you would have inevitably opened. Simplier is better.
While I do enjoy this path more instead of the MC having a built in deadly enemy after being given a "gift" by a god. I'm still intrigued by the previous path and would have read it anyways. The Human Fruit is a truly interesting one to me, and I really wanted to see what you'd do with it. It teleporting off immediately to the One Piece world apparently was the off putting part to me. When asked what would happen to a human who ate the Human Fruit, Oda guessed that perhaps they might achieve enlightenment. I was really looking forward to how you'd implement this in a cultivation world where this can directly translate into power. Thanks for writing đđœ looking forward to the next chapter