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Comments of chapter undefined of Soul Land: Rise of a God!

wm_ali
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flood phyton and sword of nine sun. when i think about how his fight style later and if he can use them at the same time. flood phyton evolve to sun chaser emperor phyton (explaination: flood phyton matrial soul + immortal herb(poison+fire)+effect from sword of nine sun). u dont need to make it became dragon cause not all dragon strong. its more effective if u make it can aid him in battle when the snake became avatar? skill: 2nd: strangle improve strength and flexcibility of hand,foot, and body to strangle and restrain enemy. maybe he can became a bit more flexxible to evade in close combat fight. like orochimaru in naruto series. 3rd: corrosive skin (passive) his skin produce corrosive skin. everything that get touch by phyton skin will hit by corrosive skin. (maybe can even corrode tang san secret weapon at the later stage) (active) improve defends 4th: stealth body improve agility and strength. (remove sound when u move, more harder to catch with normal eyes sight) 5th: snake clone 3 clone aid him to fight/train/learn/cultivate. when destroyed will became a lot of snake that attack/bite nearest enemy(poisonous of course). like orochimaru in naruto series. 6th: emperor gaze (passive) make him immune to spiritual attack. (active) when enemy see his eyes they will stun (more like spiritual attack). 7th: sun chaser emperor phyton avatar manifestation of his matrial soul. has his own conciusness can use spirit skill. 8th: conqueror domain. weakening enemy strength, agility, defend, and spirit. like conqueror haki from one piece 9th: petrified attack (passive) every attack that hit make the became stone. (even when when he use sword) its like boa hancock power from one piece.

wm_ali
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corrosive skin his skin produce corrosive poison.

LuciferMorninStar
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Python Second rings ability- python sight control attack, stun you for 2 second. 3 rings- poison arrow or slash, more use soul power can get more arrows or slashes. 4 rings- passive buff gg for the strength, speed, agility for 100% from your own physical form( example gg strength 10+100%-10=20) 5 rings- poison flame can use for defense or attack.

wm_ali
wm_aliLv3wm_ali

sword of nine sun 1st: infernal sword imbune your sword with high concentrait fire and increase penetration of sword. (more higher your cultivation more higher the temperature/degre and more easly penetrait enemy defends. 2nd: sun breath passive spirit skill. repelish stamina in the fight. impove strength and agility. 3rd: fire step boost your step like a rocket (need some training to use it) 4th: ring of fire like a pit to fight and prevent enemy to run. 5th: uncountrollable fire every swing of your sword produce fire to attack enemy but becareful u can aim your fire to the enemy but the area around you or the area around your enemy you aim can be on fire unpredictably. 6th: sun teleportation. as long as under the sun u can go whereever you want. limit to the place he already visit or in a dangerous situation u can just active it to run but the place u go will be random. cast time : 10 (when u are not in a hurry and knok where u want to go). insta cast: 2 s when in dangerous situation and in a hurry to run. 7th: sword of nine sun avatar bankai of ryu jakka. everything burn to ashes even its soul. bonus effect: enable attack immaterial thing like soul or other ting + awaken the absolute fire element. 8th: domain of fire the areas around you burn with fire without exexcaption 9th: the dawn of the nine sun. summon nine sun to aid u in the fight. more like apocalypse. improve overall fire power 9 times to all fire relate spirit skill. bonus effect everything under the 9 sun will be domain of fire.

Brokedepressed
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Two questions: First, will he have a love interest? Cus I would suggest he pick up the snake staff girl from the Star Dou forrest. That way he isn’t ntring anybody from the main cast and you could even use the mutual snake aspects of their spirits to give them a spirit fusion ability. Second, what are you gonna do about spirit bones? In order for a twin spirit user to survive getting all 18 spirit rings, he needs to at least have a full set of 6 bones and preferably a 7th evolving external spirit bone to absord the excess energy. Cus I suggest you get 3 bones for each of his spirits. 2 limbs and a torso bone for his sword spirit(perhaps one that helps him form a sword heart). Then the other 2 limbs and a skull bone for his serpent spirit. Plus I had an idea for the external bone, magic eyes. You could have him fight a creature with powerful eyes or maybe 2 head and have them drop an external spirit bone, one eye that fits his sword and one that fits his serpent

_GoldenStick_
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try to make sword spirit ability with 9 stroke, 1 stroke • ****** I'm not good at making skills[cry] I see it on fanfic btw [img=faceslap]

Anonematp
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for the snake i think stealth would be good or different types of venom for different occasions for the sword, make a version of Ryūjin Jakka

KDB_enjoyer314
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for the sword you can go with the basics by name, like an ability that makes it catch fire or something, for the snake I have no idea