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Comments of chapter undefined of The plot collapses: All the heroines are broken!

Kaelight
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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

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Sheizzcoldasice
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I don’t know if you guys liked it?… Its my first time writin such a complex scene.

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Erubey
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To be honest this chapter might be my favourite I don't know why buy in most villain reincarnator novels that try to steal protagonists destiny easily forgive the heroines when they show a little bit of affection and act like they tasted chicken blood What kind of ultimate licking dog would forgive someone that has been demeaning you for years? I was so aggrieved i was close to puking blood but thanks to this chapter my Dao Heart stabilized i feel Much better

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Lion_Singh
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KoAery
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2000 chapters of any of the novel I have read did not satisfy me but in just 24 chapters I am already satisfied thank you author for making such a perfect chapter now I just wanna see what happens next!

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Pamela_Smith_0713
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good good Also is she turning into a yander

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Juwade
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This was so well written. The depth of this chapter was too deep to fathom. Ingenious way of writing I haven't seen in a long time(like 6 years ago). Great job author 👏🪙

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MoreMercury76
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Thank you for the chapter

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White_ninja
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thanks for the chapter

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Hfetjh
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love it [img=update][img=recommend]

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Cosmic_Wayfinder
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all that for for business now you missed your chance

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George_WEB
George_WEBLv6George_WEB

Great chapter , really well thought, I can hardly wait for the next chapter 😊👏👏👏

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DaoistjUIpf3
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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Luceria
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man... The best chapter in this novel so far, and maybe even one of the best scenes in the novel I've ever read usually most of the main characters just forgave the heroine just like that despite what they have done, and to see something like this feels so refreshing, such a great comeback from the main character This novel may only be only 24 chapters but this is one of the best novels i've ever read, keep up the good work

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DaoistjUIpf3
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Best scene I've seen in any novel written, manipulative, dependable, heart breaker.

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Jusz
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Thanks for the chapter !

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oobess
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thanks for the chapter

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Sammy_Amigo
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thanks for the chapter

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Anonymous_Anon_9763
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The way you are writing this novel with good consistency and extra plot twists, it will surely reach another height.

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Kono_Timoda
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Honestly, I felt like making the MC figure out that his thoughts are being read happened too soon. I felt like "open thoughts" idea was a very interesting twist, and I was looking forward to seeing how the other heroines would react to his thoughts as they interacted but now the MC can manipulate the heroines into falling in love which ruins the wholesome nature of the story. Other than that change that I don't like, it's great so far🙂 I like the idea.

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Ernesto_Macedo
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Me enamoré de esta novela porfa no la avandones👍