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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Back in Ancient Times

Hemanth_Chandra
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at this stage, i mainly hate two things about mc: 1) he's already very powerful, able to create a universe for all i care. but at the end, sometimes you still make him look like he didn't understand some things or relations. i honestly see a grandfather playing with children in a children's mindset, and although it would feel good for mc pov, it does not look good. 2) he's trying to control everything. making sure his hand is present in every major decision which is honestly too much at this point. like right now, he could've let orochimaru do his thing and just change the chemicals or such, but no, he had to beat him down, then making sure he follows the same step everytime, meaning it would go the same with or without his interference. it's just so frustrating you know. but at the end, i hope you do these two things moderately, no need to change his personality too much, and also, love the ff man. just feeling very negative at this point.

Jubei_Kemogami
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shun is not a a good Sensei when he has to be it's only when he has favoritism to someone he's sick

DaoistCed
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Gracias por el capítulo!! me agradan esos disipulos