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Comments of chapter undefined of Sakuradan

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Ike_Barber
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So far, I like the story. While your writing style is a bit simplistic, you do a well done job conveying the characters thoughts and emotions. There was some things that could use rewording (Opening paragraph and Yuno’s friendship with Sora for examples) but other than that, I look forward to future chapters 👍🏾👍🏾

comic215
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Thanks my guy. Im trying to work on making my writing a little less simplistic but I believe that will change over time as I continue writing. I hope I don’t disappoint ya in the future 🙏

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KuriMaki
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Silver hair tsundere?! Can’t wait to see more of her 🙏

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123sst
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Interesting prologue