Comments of chapter undefined of Aiden's Secret

This may not be my first time seeing other authors not using the quotation dialogue but I'd like to suggest if author try to use it

It would be great if u shorten ur paragraph.... Sometimes its boring to read long paragraphs... Also increase the chapters also ... Make sure to have 1200 to 1500 words when u write a chapter... But the story is interesting and so none of the mistake gonna make people stop from reading it....

Nice chapter..it was short for a first chapter, and the paragraphs were too long neverthless it had a good entry

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