Emmanuel_Capricorn
I really enjoyed the story. I think you did really well with the fights scenes as similar to the original story it got you feeling pumped up. A suggestion for improvement would be to plan out a chapter more throughly(or plan it out if you don’t do so). For example I believe Hellspawns story would have had more of an impact if you had placed it before his final confrontation with Bakugo. The story did make me tear up though so I would consider that a job well done. A suggestion for the story would be to explore the effect of Bakugo killing the villain(ie how he feels afterwards, guilt? Pleasure?) this would help add some more humanity to the otherwise rageful ball of energy.