Kurogano
I commend the author for his effort, but if I am being honest, this story leaves much to be desired. It is too infantil and poorly written, and all the op things Harry already received pretty much ruins whatever struggle that may come next. Also there is too much mixing of stories that makes everything a bit crazy.
Si soy completamente sincero estoy un poco decepcionado ya que prácticamente no explicaste nada y en unas cuantas palabras lo volviste el más Op de todo el universo........ lo cual hace que cualquier cosa que le pongas en frente para tu historia se vuelva aburrido porque no va a ver nadie que lo pueda derrotar y lo peor de todo es que me creí el hecho que esas llave espada iban a dejar de serlo cuando dijiste que podían evolucionar y cambiar de forma, me largo no más importa que mujeres tenga en el harem Harry cuando la historia se convierte en esto se vuelve basura. Hubiera sido 100 veces mejor que escribieras sobre su viaje paso a paso que lo que hiciste aca
It's good that the author is a man of culture, I'm just surprised by the titles, and now that I remember, I had seen an HP x DxD fanfic, where the mc is a 1000-year-old guy who studied with the founders of howar and has girlfriends of all times, as well as serafal, but I don't remember beyond that, I stopped reading it when I finished the little HP arc, because in truth, I got bored because it got serious. It's the same with another HP x Marvel fanfic, where mcHarry was sent to Azkavan and then he escapes with the elves, then he trolls the wizards making a kind of competition, and dombuldore there was a dark version, when the fun ended , he got serious with mafia gangs and bored me.