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Comments of chapter undefined of Immortal In The Magic World

Mute
MuteLv13Mute

Translation is really bad, i expected better from lonelytree but this reads like slightly edited MTL, the novel itself is quite boring and poorly written, every side character is flat and forgettable and the interactions with people are boring.

Mute
MuteLv13Mute

Or alteast do a better job editing, add some capitalization and actually read the chapters and see if they flow properly.

Lonelytree:Because it is slightly edited mtl lol. That's what I'm being paid to do XD
radude4411
radude4411Lv15radude4411

Alright review time this novels translation is 8/10. But the story is pretty good and definitely worth the read. I really hope it gets picked for continued translation.

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Pakulimbu1
Pakulimbu1Lv3Pakulimbu1

Nice, waiting for the official translation now.Il

Jack_N_Mikhail
Jack_N_MikhailLv15Jack_N_Mikhail

🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃 🍃🌴🌴🌴🌴🌴🍃 🍃🌴🌻🌻🌻🌴🍃 🍃🌴🌻🌼🌻🌴🍃 🍃🌴🌻🌼🌻🌴🍃 🍃🌴🌻🌻🌻🌴🍃 🍃🌴🌴🌴🌴🌴🍃 🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃 ───── Thanks ───── Foя тнє cнαpтєя ────────── from Jack

Tetractys
TetractysLv15Tetractys

Not a bad story. I appreciate the effort in trying to keep the terms relatively the same despite the machine translation. Let's see where this goes. Thanks for the chapter!

BoundlessDaoist
BoundlessDaoistLv4BoundlessDaoist

i want thousands of more chapters, i will not review it till i read 10,000 more chapters.

Young_Laugh_Smiley
Young_Laugh_SmileyLv11Young_Laugh_Smiley

thanks for the chapter ☺️

radude4411
radude4411Lv15radude4411

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

radude4411
radude4411Lv15radude4411

Omg omg omg we got picked wooooo

Dragon_Venin
Dragon_VeninLv1Dragon_Venin

that's the first novel I read in this app and I really liked it

Everythingonurmind
EverythingonurmindLv3Everythingonurmind

I would have supported the book if the translation was better since I like the premise but its unfortunate 😔

Balloon_Enthusiast
Balloon_EnthusiastLv2Balloon_Enthusiast

farewell

CCP_ARE_RETARDED
CCP_ARE_RETARDEDLv2CCP_ARE_RETARDED

Trash why you put imortal in your tittle but mc not strong enough from ch 1 look at One Punch man eps 1 saitama can one punch the enemy like the title say. but you !!! not even close stop baiting people change thetitle !!!!

Odorico
OdoricoLv6Odorico

The concept of this novel is very good, too bad the author is not talented or else this would be one of the best novels I have ever read...

RebelKid
RebelKidLv14RebelKid

Why does the translator keeps changing the characters gender. One time it’s a he and another time it’s a she?

nathbregou27
nathbregou27Lv12nathbregou27

Getting picked up already ? Cool

Ale_Eonnie
Ale_EonnieLv4Ale_Eonnie

Wajah
WajahLv14Wajah

Recommended

MangoChild
MangoChildLv4MangoChild

Dude it been a while now .What's up?? ??

shawn_myers
shawn_myersLv14shawn_myers

thanks for your novel, I can't wait for more