Hmmm. Good story so far but please do us all a favor and edit the chapters after 40. I always get scared around ch. 40 when I'm reading a decent novel because it always goes downhill afterwards.
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if you don't have a good English editor, please let me help you. The story concept is good, but you will lose lots of readers if you don't clean up the pronouns and general readability .