Comments of chapter undefined of Surviving in my Own Unpublished Failed Novel
Surviving in my Own Unpublished Failed Novel
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the story is good so far, but if i were to critic's this book its bout mc, he is way to deep in his talk to self LOL, so u need to give him danger sense skill or haki like one piece LOL, cant see him dying yet hahahhahaha, he is way too deep in his monolouge and most of time overthinking everything, he need to sort his mind LOL, really need hahahaha. but let me remind again this book is good keep going hehehehhe
