False_Architect
Hi, I'm editor Yusi from 𝘔𝘦𝘨𝘢𝘯𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘭. I have read through your book for about 50 chapters, They're great. I would like to ask that are you interested in joining us with considerable bonus and reading share to support your writing career. If you are interested, please send me an email: usi@𝘔𝘦𝘨𝘢𝘯𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘭.com (I’m not a robot but a real person if you concern, and you can find me on FB as well)
So much info-dumping, too much info-dumping, information that could have been told throughout more chapters through more natural means was just dumped. And you know what? I skipped all of it, even worse. I promise you, all the information I just skipped, yeah, it's gonna have f*vk all to do with the rest of the plot, so I didn't even miss a thing.
Hello I'm Avron and well you're a new author well so am i would love it if we got to know each other you seem to be growing and i want us to become friends and grow together I have a novel called rise of a star and I want to see If you'll read it and give me some feedback and good start to your first chapter