Comments of chapter undefined of Tales of Demons and Gods: The Blood Emperor

It is because of this kind of out-of-nowhere creativity that readers drop works. An inheritance of this kind breaks the balance of the work, and hints at a major hole in the plot. A hole like, why did nie li not feel the place of the temple, that guy's senses are way above the existence you are trying to portray, it becomes obvious, don't I know? What I do know, is that it feels very forced in my opinion. If you want this development to fit into your fic, you should announce it in little omake's during earlier chapters. You know, posing how that red orb-shaped entity senses Shin's closeness and reacts or something similar, or explore another more realistic option, like including a book or note or myth in Shin's heritage in his clan that talks about orchid city and consequently about this powerful being and the relationship it has with the mc's clan. Lastly, a writing tip for you dear author, without sarcasm or anything, is to omit chance and coincidences and create a solid foundation for events to take place, so no heavy criticisms like this will arise in the near future. Writing is difficult and doing it well, even more so. Courage, don't be disappointed. Put imagination into it and have fun. Thanks for the chapter.