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Comments of chapter undefined of Havok, Lunatic of the Darkness

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I like this story a lot so far, hope you don’t drop it. Only thing I think could improve so far is more information about mana and how powerful exactly each rank is on average, you can do this by drawing parallels with reality, for instance a blue core is able to destroy a town or city with an attack is a parallel that gives readers an idea of the power levels. Another thing is the development of havok, we still don’t know any of the new abilities except whispers from Satan, and we also don’t know his rank, a bit of explanation about his abilities wouldn’t hurt by the way.