Luicfer_2807
Great chapters
its an intresting style, cant really tell, but since its a book and not on tv i think u need to get rid of the talking to camera scenes and just keep it as a pov, but either way still works and was a fun read, so you do you author :)
me want
It's very distracting, too many lines. "balsjsksjdjsjsak" said by Danny while putting nalajsksksksk I like this format better
Thank you for the chapter
When is the next chapter coming out ???
Love it
I hope you start typing again.
Last 3 chapters driving me crazy dropping but good luck all the best
AWESOME thanks for the chapter đȘđđ
Good Chapters
I enjoy the talking to camera parts - makes me laugh
Great chapter loving the family interaction but would also love to see his girlfriend however I understand these were technically 1 big one seperated
Great chapters ,loved the interactions đ đ đ đ .
Gud
Hey bro, you will continue to write this fanfic, we are really looking forward to it.
is this fic abandoned author-san??
Please update
Is this dropped ?
This style was horrible but before that story was great please continue like that.. Come back soon.