Comments of chapter undefined of Conquering The Novel

As I am a newbie author, there may be numerous info dumps and grammatical errors at the beginning of the book. However, the following chapter gets better, so please hang in there.🙂

i just hope others chapter longer........

Your story is very good, but please keep the chapters longer😬

You need to train your grammar more :)

This chapter seems a bit short and there are some parts where I got kinda confused especially the dialogue part. I suggest you can try using quotation dialogue

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

You should use commas more often to space sentences out.

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thanks for the chapter

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moebus reincarnations? Next level "I've got your back, you've got mine" 🙂

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

yo it's great. ....

dozen ss-rank per country? it's actually huge number dude. presence of a ss-rank is larger than all after all.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola