Comments of chapter undefined of My Harem Is Not What I Expected!

no I think it's decent. I don't know how far along the arc you are, but you could have held back the fact that she's a fragment and just kind of make us guess that she is. based of how she's acting but other than that it's okay it doesn't feel like it's rushed. it is going to be interesting though if Stella comes back in this arc and is like you've got fragments all around you can you not see them or tell?