hey author i just catched up and to be honest their indeed something that can be improved but nothing too exaggerated also when you are going to start changing the novel on webnovel can you tell us if you can on authors note so i can start reading it again
Too me this novel is great, without criticism you can't find plot problem or others. So I think every will make this novel great also some people will always criticize bcz they can't too things that you can do.
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To say the truth author the first chapter weren't that great but I have seen worse, plus the novel got better and better after few chapters.
I don't understand will you delete this version and start a new? Or just edit this one?
Does this story need a system? I mean, I love this book for it is. Yeah it had some mistakes but I've seen worse! Well, just let us know when you've made the update!
