Comments of chapter undefined of I Screwed the Novel's Plot

Hello, admirably_'s here. This is my first time writing a novel in English Language. As English isn't my native language, so there might be lots of grammatical error, wrong choice of words, etc. If you have any question/found plot hole/suggestions of the novel, feel free to ask/tell me in the comments section! Sincerely, admirably_

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Uh.... " My butt has been turned into a tomato..." .... that's a weird way to describe this...

what is that slap tho?

Me intrigued 😵