Comments of chapter undefined of RWBY: GAMER PATH

The story story is beautiful, but one criticism I have to make is that you waste too much time with the description of the characters and their statistics, in this chapter you could just give a short description of what opponents Jack faced and what skills he acquired, because if not the chapter becomes a bit boring, so you can concentrate on writing more interesting parts without taking up too much space for descriptions. For the next opponents I recommend the kengan asura/omega characters

Hey author just an opinion on your new fic, how about instead of reincarnating in the body of scp 507, reincarnate him as a newborn with the ability of scp 507, no offense but imagining the mc has the look of scp 507 is kinda turn off

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Stay on target!!!!

Good Chapter

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Thanks for the great chap!

Thanks for the chapter! Unfortunately I don't know anything about SCPs

Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter. Option 2

Thanks for the chapter

By the way. Based on the mc picture you gave he basically looks like kazuya from konosuba?