Comments of chapter undefined of Into The Kaleidoscope

thanks for the chapter man.

This is actually pretty good. It was a rough start with the first 6 or 7 chapters before he finally gets to Game of Thrones, but I like the way things are headed and the whole herald act. good job. I cant wait for the next chapter.

Yeah it's best to follow your own plan for the story rather than second guessing yourself. You are doing a good job so far as he can still use his foreknowledge to make the Starks and the north indebted to him. The herald of the old gods angle is good as religion is very important in Game of thrones.

Thanks for the chapter...It's um, better. However, i have to ask. You haven't actually read Game of Thrones have you?

A brain of stone with a heart of gold.

Thanks for the chapter

Nice!

Didnt expect MC to be polite at the end. A bit too arrogant bit that is to be expected from a man such as the MC, He reminds me of Jay. Anyways great chapter take my powah stones

Obrigado pelo capitulo.

Good chapter. I'm interested to see how the old God's respond to the mc I'm unsure whether they would hate him or like him for warning the starks. Lol faceless men and shadow babies sounds grim wonder what would happen if they both attacked at once seeing as they are opposed death vs life

Hey your story man, as long as you have an outline of future steps should be fine.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter! 😁👍