Comments of chapter undefined of Into The Kaleidoscope

One of the best first chapters that I've read. MC is cold rational and charismatic son of a ...... And not scummy hypersexual eight grader. Grammar and storytelling is exceptional too. I really hope that this trand will go on. Will be waiting for the next chapters with excitement. Thank you

The only annoying thing with this is that even at the end, after knowing he got betrayed because of something illogical, he is completely blindsided when Neal does something illogical again.

I came to this novel because for me the other one completely spoiled in the mcu arc but I still like the style of the protagonist with the power of technology

Thanks for the amazing first chapter mate! I read half of it in your other finished novel but I had to go to work and dropped it halfway. Now I finished it and I have to say it's an amazing chapter! Can't wait for more. I hope you could release maybe 6 or at least 5 chapters a week but if not I will get anything you can throw at us. Anyway good job mate!

Hahahahahha

Can’t wait for him to return to this world later on

Super intelligent villains are always take down by irrational idiots.... Rip bleach villains...

Very interesting

Thanks for the chapter. One of the best first chapters I have read so far

Me gustó mucho el capítulo

Viejo esto es hermoso.

TFTC, this first chapter gave me chills,really good how we got to know the MC.

Hemolacria?! Luca are You? And Mr.Bucharati?!! Is A JoJo Reference!!

MC has made hiruzen , Dumbledore , aizen proud from his manipulation.

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Obrigado pelo capítulo.

Nice

So, the MC doesn't learn from his mistakes and always loses? And btw, Neal wouldn't survive because the guards will shoot him down immediately. But you do you author.

Thanks for the chapter! 😁👍