A good story, honestly I look forward to an update soon and I'm curious how Scott's relationship with Jean is going to develop, I hope you haven't backed off from doing the story a harem.
I just dicovered this FF and caught up. Then I read it again AND the comments. From what you wrote you still have alot already planned out. This is an amazing story. I realy hope you dont drop this. ( If you do, please give me all the spoilers plz)