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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Gacha System

Fuckyall
FuckyallLv13Fuckyall

hes pretty Weak for someone who has a Gacha system. Bro u said he may not get 2 devil fruit WHY ??. I mean with his system he can maybe get something like which can Cancel curses.

HereAlice
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Long Story, I dunno when it going to end but probably take more than 100 chapters.

Chaos_Order8:By the way author kun. Are u aiming for a short story or long story or in between? Or you don't yet....
Fuckyall
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Our mc didn’t start his journey yet but he already messed up a lot of things

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ReviewGuy
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the heck is this? this is literally the best chapter ever. This fanfic from a normal enjoyable fanfic turn into a freaking great fanfic.

Negative_Kun
Negative_KunLv4Negative_Kun

Hahaha mc spouting talk no jutsu in Ann, another cliffhanger-kun 💀 well I'll wait for next chapter when mc will get beaten by Garp and know the difference between strength and family life.🤗 ( Thanks for the chapter, and fir next chapter i have gift for Cliffhanger-kun 🔪👀 )

MG_Othinus
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This chapter is such a saving grace.... Last chapter is really2 bad, hope no one drop this yet because this chapter literally the best out of all chapters in this fanfic. 1 - System talking sense into Luke 2 - Ann and Luke conversation 3 - Luke realizing how childish he is

JONTY_
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Tora_ryu
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Luke just needs a big crew of women to also act as protectors/mother's with them. He doesn't have to head to the grand line this second. Can have Desire eat the barrier devil fruit in this world and recruit her or have Nojiko joined as a sniper. Makino could also join them as a caretaker while learning to fight or something. I would recommend others like Mikita and Reiju but they're in Whiskey Peak and North Blue respectively. Since you've already gone down the rabbit hole with alternate reality just have the other two from the monster trio be girls in this timeline. Tbh, the truck god said he couldn't JOIN the straw hats, never said that group needed to exist in this world. Lucy, femZoro and femSanji can join his crew since he's already taking Ann away from joining the Whitebeard pirates. There's always a loophole that needs to be taken advantage of. You still gotta do the romance between Luke and Lucy/Makino. I am curious if you're sticking only to characters from one piece or will have a crossover character or two?

Hanni_Baal
Hanni_BaalLv4Hanni_Baal

Now that I think about it, maybe he can still be friends with Smoker, he just has to inform him of Ann's lineage, and tell him that's why he was forced to be a pirate, with that Smoker won't want to kill him, and will try to change the navy from the inside. .. probably.

Ryofu
RyofuLv11Ryofu

Secret Technique

Midvors
MidvorsLv10Midvors

He's dead, no doubt.

Slc4free
Slc4freeLv15Slc4free

What anime is the girl on the cover picture with purple Hair from?

TehStorm
TehStormLv4TehStorm

The MC just needs to get stronger. If oden could raise his two children in the new world where everyone and their pets know haki then the MC can protect his children where people don't even know what haki is...It's much better than leaving his children behind and only visiting 3 times a year...

jeanpierregerardo
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More chapter

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

Im done with this.

Jaymes_Davee
Jaymes_DaveeLv2Jaymes_Davee

WHELP looks like garp is gonna kill luke

T0xicity
T0xicityLv14T0xicity

Listen author, just because you want kids and cannot have them does not mean that you have to ruin your story with them. Fantasize about having them in your own head, not by killimg the potential of a story!

DaoistbfmAkV
DaoistbfmAkVLv1DaoistbfmAkV

this is why I hate systems with a personality.

Darkened7
Darkened7Lv3Darkened7

tyftc. keep it up

Kookorachas
KookorachasLv4Kookorachas

Great chapter Please continue

Croissance
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What is the sauce of the cover man?, I need to know for research purpose *cough*