RubberPeen
I'll be honest with you... your BNH ff novel is the best đđđ I like the idea of ââthe quirk even though it's taken from one of the game characters especially the idea to spawn pokemon đ As for the shortcomings in my own opinion after reading your novel it's about the few activities carried out by your mc outside of the main story, my suggestion is to add side stories or additional stories outside of the main story đ€ I also hope that after he finishes with BNH he will go to another universe đ€© well I really like your novel THANK YOU đ
Hey why not use character ability posession card such as Peak Whitebeard,Fujitora,2nd,3rd,4th/5th Gear Luffy,Jiren the Grey,Mastered Ultra Instinct Goku,Ultra Ego Vegeta,LSSJ Broly,Saitama,Miles Morales Spider-man with Item card Venom,Item card Nanotech Iron-Man or Black Panther,Ant-man with Pym particles etc.