the first time where i feel that the first chapter is a filler lol... I felt like the author was struggling to meet the word count with all the "guess" "you wont believe if i say so" "discover yourself" that happened there that he could just say in 1 line and be done with it.
Most authors would just make their character stumble upon a device where the date and time is being shown. This is my first time reading a witty way of doing it. Well done Author!
The conversation is unnaturally long. Character talk for one paragraph in one breath, with plenty of explanation and description inside the dialogue for a mundane thing like a rock.
