Comments of chapter undefined of Gaara of the Desert Reincarnation
Gaara of the Desert Reincarnation
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You are right. These first probably 15 chapters are pretty bad because I wasn't sure what I as trying to do with the character. After all of this I personally want to go back and rewrite the first 20 chapters. But I also don't want to leave this unfinished as it is.
marcelll3214:But he isnt... He is reincarnated older guy. Nobody said anything about being emotionless but reading about a scaredy cat isnt fun. He is Gaara! The somethimes crazy and sometimes ultra calm guy. He is also ninja. They arent scared all the time. Why does he care so much about peoples opinion of him? I mean ok care but tho this extent? It is like he doesnt want anything else but this. It will come naturaly with time and his actions. I did not come to read naruto fanfic about feelings but about fighting, murder, powerleveling, domination, strategy, and maybe a little bit of romance.
