Comments of chapter undefined of Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!

Info dumping in the middle of an action scene?

this info dump is kinda unecesarry for now. and its in the middle of a fight scene. dear author. try to imagine yourself aas reader with 0 knowledge. now does he(the reader) need a 1 chapter explenation about 1 term (old age") right now? will it ever be needed? or do you just want to include this info becouse you spent a lot od time world building? (regrettably) readers dont need all the knowledge the worldbuilder has. you need to choose what info is necesarry and what isnt. and if you want to include the info that isnt necessary you need a good moment/timing to include it. and maby not an entire chapter long also i noticed that you use fortunately and unfortunetly a LOT. those 2 words kinda lost their weight because of the constant use. also my teacher would publicly shame me if i constantly used (un)fortunately. maby try to use Synonyms for words you use often or try to use them less so that they dont lose their "weight"(so that the words can be taken seariously unlike if they are constantly used)

the old age is still a bit foggy to me.. i usually asociate it with a cold weapon or old firearm... but looks like its different here.

Thanks for the Chapter!

this chapter is useless and unnecessary and makes reading this novel annoying if things like this continue to happen

Was the girl’s name Anna Heart? Is she a descendent or just have the same last name?