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We All Cultivate As Monsters

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WritingNoob
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Pretty good start. Only critique I would give is you didn't give an idea of how Nergal looks as well as the '' kid''

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HandsomeWriter
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You're right. I should have added a character description, especially since it's a key part of his characterization. Will go back and edit.

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Haha, a pretty opening, keep it up

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KeyJaySea0620
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This chapter is pretty great. Keep it up.

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Mugetsu353
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I like the way you started your story, different from most other stories I've read. I hope Nergal is not one of those MC's who acts like an idiot and powers up through friendship. Looking forward to how this goes.

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