HandsomeWriter
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... You don't go around doing this to every new release, do you?
Haha, a pretty opening, keep it up
Pretty good start. Only critique I would give is you didn't give an idea of how Nergal looks as well as the '' kid''
This chapter is pretty great. Keep it up.
I like the way you started your story, different from most other stories I've read. I hope Nergal is not one of those MC's who acts like an idiot and powers up through friendship. Looking forward to how this goes.
