Comments of chapter undefined of HxH: A New Reality
HxH: A New Reality
WildPolarBear
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I thought this would be more interesting Phantom Troupe than the original one. Looks like they're just another group takes everything they want and want nothing taken away from them. Personally, i think this would be more interesting if they have an agenda like Akatsuki and other villain groups, probably the only thing i can expect in this story is about all killing, stealing, killing and stealing again until they reach the main plot of the OG story. Welp, each to their own i guess.
I understand your point too but this is fanfiction, well although yours is technically a fanfiction aside from having adding an OC, what's the difference between the original story and your work? I know Troupe is Troupe if they act like Troupe but wouldn't that be repetitive? because you said they need to be Troupe, so that means you're just going to repeat what they did in the original story with just a little bit of twist that MC is part of the group and a vice leader. You know since this 12 yrs before the plot in Yorknew City, there's just so much potential in your work. This is just my personal opinion brother, i still appreciate your work keep it up!
WildPolarBear:I understand your point but would it really be the Troupe if I gave them a goal to follow like that? The whole point is that it gives them freedom to live how they want while giving them a place to come back to except for a few jobs. Plus I really have zero idea what goal I could give them without making it personal towards Loki. You want me to give them the goal of world peace or destruction of the world? I don't think know....
